Sunday, July 25, 2010

The Sorrowful Rose

Alright, well here's the first poem of this installment, and this is one that I myself wrote:

A young enchanting rose
Scarlet red and luscious green
But all things living
Turn to dust
The lovely rose
Once full of life
Now wilting away
In autumn showers
Once red
Now bleak
Blown apart
By deceiving winds
 Remember, constructive criticism only, not everybody will like the same type of poetry so negative comments are unneeded. Thank you and I hope you enjoyed the poem, there will be more to come.

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