Sunday Poetry Day

   This week's poem was one of the best that I have written yet, in fact, this poem was published in a book. I hope you enjoy it, its somewhat mushy, so it may not be your style.

The rose of my life

Blossoming into a beautiful flower
Bringing joy and happiness to the garden
The exquisite rose
So full of life and joy
Even as day turns to night
Her radiant beauty is enough to light
The darkness into bright
Beautiful daylight
Her smile;
Carefree and joyous
Bringing hapiness to those around
Calming the world to not even whisper a sound
The rose
Creative and caring
Cunningly charming the chiding and clawing voices of life.
Coming out on top as the victor
The magnificent rose.

The Sorrowful Rose

Alright, well here's the first poem of this installment, and this is one that I myself wrote:

A young enchanting rose

Scarlet red and luscious green

But all things living

Turn to dust

The lovely rose

Once full of life

Now wilting away

In autumn showers

Once red

Now bleak

Blown apart

By deceiving winds

 Remember, constructive criticism only, not everybody will like the same type of poetry so negative comments are unneeded. Thank you and I hope you enjoyed the poem, there will be more to come.