Remember, constructive criticism only, not everybody will like the same type of poetry so negative comments are unneeded. Thank you and I hope you enjoyed the poem, there will be more to come.A young enchanting roseScarlet red and luscious greenBut all things livingTurn to dustThe lovely roseOnce full of lifeNow wilting awayIn autumn showersOnce redNow bleakBlown apartBy deceiving winds
Right now, we’re just a couple of guys just trying things out, hanging out, and passing the time. We have both done our separate things, and will continue separate paths to a degree. One of us may post something funny and entertaining, while one may post something informative and interesting. Either way, we hope you enjoy what we offer.
Sunday, July 25, 2010
The Sorrowful Rose
Alright, well here's the first poem of this installment, and this is one that I myself wrote:
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Sunday Poetry Day
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